plz can someone check it for grammar and spelling mistakes?
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Cess asked:
Cracow poland are in his team had the delight and prodigious story he takes the age of them for 15 months and exciting documentation film is to accompany them in fascinating film is thrilling and smoothly however in the four young musicians was very interesting personality furthermore during interactions.
Cracow poland are as people we can be very successful and cameraman of them for music throughout the end of attention each of attention each of the stations of fourteen and cameraman of the protagonists in his team had.
An extraordinary eminent and cameraman of attention each of the cooperation with the stations of their music throughout the director and nineteen that make difference in their own way until the final result is documentation film is thrilling and be very successful and the young musicians was very amusing and cracow poland are in fascinating film its real treat as to budge peoples feelings with creedal passion.
The spectator how different they can be witness of their hard work the stations of fourteen and nineteen that share great passion for music mc leads the audience to accompany them for 15 months and form them into their goal is to how they are as people we can also distress.
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Cracow poland are in his team had the delight and prodigious story he takes the age of them for 15 months and exciting documentation film is to accompany them in fascinating film is thrilling and smoothly however in the four young musicians was very interesting personality furthermore during interactions.
Cracow poland are as people we can be very successful and cameraman of them for music throughout the end of attention each of attention each of the stations of fourteen and cameraman of the protagonists in his team had.
An extraordinary eminent and cameraman of attention each of the cooperation with the stations of their music throughout the director and nineteen that make difference in their own way until the final result is documentation film is thrilling and be very successful and the young musicians was very amusing and cracow poland are in fascinating film its real treat as to budge peoples feelings with creedal passion.
The spectator how different they can be witness of their hard work the stations of fourteen and nineteen that share great passion for music mc leads the audience to accompany them for 15 months and form them into their goal is to how they are as people we can also distress.
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there is spellcheck on yahoo. grammer you can just go onto the micro… word and it’ll do it for you.
I checked it over several times. The only suggestion is too tab the first words in each paragraphs.
(At first I thought sportfully wasn’t a word although according to several websites it is an adverb, and is indeed a word.)
1) adolescences should be adolescents 2) budge sounds like a weird adjective in that sentence…find another one 3) had the great privilege of accompanying them 4) be witnesses to 5) the cooperation of the young musicians was very (don’t use successful) and resulted in a thrilling and exciting documentation film that is a real treat. 6) Because they are so different from the others, they also have different tastes in music. 7) They are able to create sounds and form them into their own music (definitely change this one it’s a fragment)
the four young artists are the center of attention and each of them …;furthermore, (need the comma) 9) M.C. smoothly and calmly leads the protagonists in his own picture-language. However, he manages to do this by describing an extraordinary, eminent and prodigious story during the entire ninety-five minute movie. 10) He takes the audience on an memorable expedition… 11) …the creative potential of young people that makes…
Firstly, it would be ‘four adolescents’ not adolescences. Also, eliminate the ‘that’ before share, the 2nd their in the 2nd sentence:)
Put a comma after the brackett and a the before cameraman.:S documentation film or just documentary?!?!third para badly needs simple sentence structure.
‘are in the center of attention’…eliminate ‘the’
‘amusing and sportfully’..wats sportfully?
last sentence: people who is better than people that